1) The pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
The last time I did the elevator pitch many students said that I should improve my business plan because they didn’t think I had a competitive advantage over competitors. Some pointed out the confusion with the alpha sizing system since no one had really heard of that term before. Someone also pointed out that I should practice my pitch more before saying it on camera. I think all feedback I received was important.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on my feedback from the last pitch, I changed my whole business plan to make it simpler and more competitive. I chose a business plan that is unique and narrowed my market segment. I also tried to improve the flow of my elevator pitch by not using a cheat sheet.